I was patted on the head. Like a pet who had successfully performed a
trick for the amusement of their master. This hand belonged to an
awkward man. Gawky in all ways imaginable, right down to his twisted
front tooth and stiff legged limp. Even his attempts at levity are laden
with uncoordinated blundering. I am not quite sure what gave him the
notion that he could put his hands on me in such a manner. His arm moved
as if even he was having debate as whether his hand should have been
any where near me or my head.
Saturday, February 18, 2012
Daily Write - Hands Off
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Strong and interesting write desy. I like how powerful the emotion of displeasure coming from her, and how well you capture it in the two paragraphs. I should try digging out my old short writes and show them to you ^_^
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